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Drennan to Johnston : Full length delivery from Drennan sees Johnston down on one knee attempting the "spoon" over Kilpatrick's head. An incredible error in judgement as he only manages to glove it into his own chest. OUCH. Not sure whats hurting Johnston more, his chest or his pride.
What's instead of whats. Not too sure if the use of the comma is okay but I'll leave that for someone smarter than me. i.e. anyone.
Tiny punctuation error
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