Too many "and"s

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Vershner
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Too many "and"s

Post by Vershner » Wed Apr 12, 2017 12:22 pm

Short and wide from Bugge, and narrowly bottom edged past off-stump by Parsons and stopped by Hardiman. Neither covered themselves in glory there. Dot ball.
Either remove the first "and", or better still, remove "and stopped by {wk}". It doesn't really fit with the next part.
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Re: Too many "and"s

Post by GM-crowfan65 » Wed Apr 12, 2017 1:04 pm

All done, Thanks
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